Monday, January 11, 2010

Electric Dryer Not Hot Enough

Silence.::. Anniversary Collaboration Review Nikto

The blog This mouth is mine played a year and decided to solicit contributions, but in a particular way .. take a piece of text which the author left unfinished, and finish reusing. This is my contribution for the event ... a short poetic prose waves. Jo! Poetry yo! Anyway, I really liked the experiment. I put in italics the original text.

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Silence


On nights like this you should think twice before saying anything...

You shouldn't break the peaceful silence that surrounds us with the first thing that comes to your mind, words might break the spell that leaves me staring at your eyes...

On nights like this, words do not bring us closer, but shatter the intimacy that flows, that entangles us both, intimacy that fuses our souls more any sound could ever express. On such a night, my silent self reaches out, trying -however futile it might seem- to comprehend the value of a moment, the diamond of a tear, the silver of a smile. On this, of all nights, my soul is bare, my skin is radiant, my hands dare Not defensible, pero caress ... Not dare protect, But expose ...

On nights like this, all I wish for Is That sacred silence That will tell me, Above All, That You understand me, love me with Such passion ...

Still, you speak.

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hope my brief comments on literary wanderings ...

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